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Julia Ingalls Friend for Life
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flatbroke Man of Constant Sorrow
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| Subject: Re: Writing Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:35 pm | |
| Cheryl can be a lot of help. She knows a lot about writing. | |
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Rob Nip it in the bud!
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| Subject: Re: Writing Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:04 pm | |
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Savannah "Psalm 34"
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| Subject: Re: Writing Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:10 pm | |
| Very cool, Julia! And yes - I'd love to hear all about it if you're willing to share. | |
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Julia Ingalls Friend for Life
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| Subject: Re: Writing Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:25 pm | |
| Well. It is a bit complicated. A lot of it revolves around a lot that has happened to me in my own life, but I am not any of the characters. It is about this girl, Francis Crandall aka Frankie. Her life is a mess. But it wasn't always a mess---until her parents started fighting. Her mother kicked her dad out of the house after a big arguement. Frankie isn't doing well at all emotionally, spiritually, or physically. She sinks down into depression. Starts making barely above failing grades. Deals with anorexia. She likes this guy named Evan, but despite what he displays, he shares no feelings for her like she thought. She feels like she has hit rock bottom. Then while walking down the street, she literally bumps into this mysterious guy who befriends her. He ends up changing his immoral ways and falls for her, and her him. Then, she finds God and becomes a Christian. She shares her new faith with her family and boyfriend. Her Mother embraces it and becomes a Christian---but her father and boyfriend don't welcome it.That is all I have so far. :) I want it to end good, but I haven't thought how yet! "The beauty of a woman is incredibly radiant when she finds her identity, her confidence, & her hope in Christ alone. "
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Rob Nip it in the bud!
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| Subject: Re: Writing Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:37 pm | |
| Sounds like an interesting story. | |
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Savannah "Psalm 34"
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ChristinaAL Little House Lady
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| Subject: Re: Writing Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:17 am | |
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bethandmanly Dean's Dedicated Diva
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| Subject: Re: Writing Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:19 am | |
| Sounds fabulous, Julia. I hope you keep going with it. | |
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alexczarn Ingalls Friend for Life
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| Subject: Re: Writing Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:45 pm | |
| Sounds great! An idea for the ending...The Christian witness of her and her mother leads her father and boyfriend to Christ. | |
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Amy Somewhere in Time
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| Subject: Re: Writing Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:51 pm | |
| That is wonderful Julia! Always a cool thing when a young person is inpired to write creatively! | |
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pamh36 Ingalls Friend for Life
Number of posts : 5900 Location : Michigan
| Subject: Re: Writing Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:56 pm | |
| That's great, Julia. It sounds like you're off to a very good start. I can't wait to hear more about it. | |
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Julia Ingalls Friend for Life
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Vanesa Ingalls Friend for Life
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| Subject: Re: Writing Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:12 am | |
| What an interesting argument, Julia! I like it very much. It seems so good that I should run a movie taking your book as a basis. Go on! Hope that I can read your book soon! Vanesa. | |
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pamh36 Ingalls Friend for Life
Number of posts : 5900 Location : Michigan
| Subject: Re: Writing Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:40 am | |
| - MissYoungClassic wrote:
- Thank you all for your encouragement! And I have thought of an ending!
Wow, that was fast! Happy writing. | |
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Julia Ingalls Friend for Life
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Vanesa Ingalls Friend for Life
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| Subject: Re: Writing Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:07 am | |
| 1967! I just love the 1960's! Vanesa. | |
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Julia Ingalls Friend for Life
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flatbroke Man of Constant Sorrow
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| Subject: Re: Writing Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:07 pm | |
| - MissYoungClassic wrote:
- Well. It is a bit complicated. A lot of it revolves around a lot that has happened to me in my own life, but I am not any of the characters.
It is about this girl, Francis Crandall aka Frankie. Her life is a mess. But it wasn't always a mess---until her parents started fighting. Her mother kicked her dad out of the house after a big arguement. Frankie isn't doing well at all emotionally, spiritually, or physically. She sinks down into depression. Starts making barely above failing grades. Deals with anorexia. She likes this guy named Evan, but despite what he displays, he shares no feelings for her like she thought. She feels like she has hit rock bottom. Then while walking down the street, she literally bumps into this mysterious guy who befriends her. He ends up changing his immoral ways and falls for her, and her him. Then, she finds God and becomes a Christian. She shares her new faith with her family and boyfriend. Her Mother embraces it and becomes a Christian---but her father and boyfriend don't welcome it.
That is all I have so far. :) I want it to end good, but I haven't thought how yet! The story basis is awesome. Kinda in the Judy Blume vein with a little V.C. Andrews thrown in and a dash of Frank Peretti. Kudos! | |
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